by kate Jul 3, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
I thought you were safe to ride with. |
by BREEawNUHH
Aw. This is so sad, so emotional, and so heartfelt. I loved it. I don't see how someone could do this to a relative. It truly sickens me. |
This poem is really nicely written and it has a very nice flow to it, so sad how sick people are and how they could ever think of these things let alone do them. great job 5/5 GG23 |
by Kate
Wow, it literally took my breath away, I briefly heard about said happening, but I do not know much of the details. I can really tell that you feel strongly about it, and thats just amazing. seriously, amazing job. |
by Lonely Rider
Amazing work... I was so engrossed in it from the first line... wonderfully told.. the sadness... the remorse of the girl could be felt... |
by Michelle18
Wow this is really good.. i liked it.. it was so sad.. i was very interested in this poem.. and im glad that you took the time to write this poem about that little girl. its nice to so someone has a heart. |