Bennette[RIP]

by kate   Jul 3, 2008


I thought you were safe to ride with.
I thought you loved me because I was your daughter.
but then you walked away from me.
about a year ago but yet you still talked to me.
where you stalking me?
when you took me away?

did I even scream when you took me to my uncles place?
was I scared for a minute or two?
I don't seem to remember anything at all.

everything about me, is on the news.
my purple highlights, my blue eyes.
my picture is all over the news, its crazy.
everyone is looking for me.

maybe if I scream loud enough they can hear.
I want my mom, I want her to tell me I'm ok.
that everything will be alright, that I won't get hurt.
but I'm laying here in the ground underneath things.
they won't find me in time, I'm running out air.

I don't know whats going on.
they just killed me here.
put me in this shallow grave.
I want my friends back.
I want my mom.
I need my mom.

why did you begin to do this to me?
I was only twelve years old.
my uncle was in on it for sure.
my step dad was in on it for sure.
why did my family stab me in the back?
why did they turn around and decided to get me?

why would you even do this to a person?
especially when its your own blood relative?
just why me?
what did i do so wrong to deserve this?

**this poem is sorta true, there was this girl in Vermont that they finally found her body about 500 yards I believe from her uncles house, I decided to write a poem or even a story about it because it was just bugging me how someone could actually do this to their niece like why would you honestly you know, there is more about this story that involved myspace and her uncle I dont want to get into the whole thing but I thought id share a little bit about it, thank you for reading.**

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  • 16 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    Aw. This is so sad, so emotional, and so heartfelt. I loved it. I don't see how someone could do this to a relative. It truly sickens me.

    "maybe if I scream loud enough they can hear.
    I want my mom, I want her to tell me I'm ok.
    that everything will be alright, that I won't get hurt.
    but I'm laying here in the ground underneath things.
    they won't find me in time, I'm running out air."

    ^^ This is my favourite part of the poem. I feel like it gives more of a look into what the victim is thinking.

    This is a wonderful piece. 5/5

    ``Briana

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This poem is really nicely written and it has a very nice flow to it, so sad how sick people are and how they could ever think of these things let alone do them. great job 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by Kate

    Wow, it literally took my breath away, I briefly heard about said happening, but I do not know much of the details. I can really tell that you feel strongly about it, and thats just amazing. seriously, amazing job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Amazing work... I was so engrossed in it from the first line... wonderfully told.. the sadness... the remorse of the girl could be felt...

    wonderful write...

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow this is really good.. i liked it.. it was so sad.. i was very interested in this poem.. and im glad that you took the time to write this poem about that little girl. its nice to so someone has a heart.

    i love it. 5/5