First of all I loved the concept from which it was written , and every single line it contained .
your emotions seemed to flow gracefully throughout the entire poem<---Jim --5/5

Nice job... keep it up...

best wishes,

Karan

Why do you write so well?? lol!

It's just brilliant. I feel sorry for those people in this site who don't notice your poems and busy with much lesser poems. It's a wonderful write. A fantastic concept to write on and not many people actually write like this. You are fantastic! :)

Very intellectual writing! hmmm..... it's good!! lovely way to convey your thoughts! true poem!!

-I'd be staring at an incomplete being through blurry glass,
Stained with unholy misfortunes and unspoken tragedies,-

this part really touched me.. i think many can relate here.
your word selection just amplifies the emotion your portraying.
Very "moving" poem.. great piece.