Well... After reading the first line I thought I'm in Pink Floyd's lyrics... lol!
Anyways... It's good poem and interesting style of writing. I enjoyed reading your poem... it was continuously reminding me one of Pink Floyd's song... :)

A disturbing poem written well, deep emotions embedded in every word.
I enjoyed the read even though filled with pain.

Wow this poem shows a lot of emotions that are hurt and tha it wants to be release...great poem truly great keep it up k.