Omw i totally loved it chicky... its drf. one of my favs of urs... u did a GREAT job!!! really u did. keep it up. 5/5 always
Kate~LSB23

I think its pretty good
it had really strong expression and flowed very well
i think it could have a more conclusive ending tho
good job
right now i think its a 4.5
=)

Amazing job, I love the emotion and the additude you put into the poem. You defanitly created a clear image in my head to understand how you feel. Outstanding job, 5/5.

-mandy

Wow...i love the words...the sense is amazing...a great combination of words!!! GOOD JOB!!!

I feel like my boyfriend and i are falling apart after two years and when i read your poem to him, we both cryed. We decided to give love another try to try and bring back what we use to have which was so great. So thank u for ur inspiration! -check out mine! id love ur feed back as well take care sweetheart!-kristy

Its good and I like it!!! And I know the feeling of that and jus recently got over it!! Good work!!

Good job I really really liked it!!

Awww...so sad...i just went through something like this my x of two years is getting married : /...its so hard so i feel for you keep your chin up babe
5/5<33

Amazeing!!! your very gifted. 5/5 you must have really been in love. Your feelings are what give you passion never forget that and keep up the good work.

I really love it, it was so emotional 10/10

WOW I Loved it!! U did a really GREAT JOB!! The only thing I didn't like was the fact that I could relate to it ALOT and it made me think of the wonderful guy I Lost but other then that it was Great!! Keep up the Good work!!

This was awesome! I love it

Wow, I can totally relate. I lost my bf of over two years a couple months ago but you have to be strong. Don't worry you'll get over it and you'll find a man that'll treat you better. But yeah I love the poem! (:

This poem was very well written and its what i am scared is going to happen with me and my fiance... but i really liked this poem! 5/5

Wow. This was such a beautiful poem and you can feel the pain thats happening throughout it. I pray this hasnt happend to you...its happened to to many...and theres too many broken hearts. Its was amazing though. 5/5

Over good! i actually cant believe that poem. fabulous. keep it up! 5/5 totally!

Loved it; that was a great poem 5/5

Such a great poem full of emotion.

Love can be hard at times but it's better to have loved and lost than never loved at all, right?

Em