by Jo
That was written amazing i'm so sorry |
by Tina Marie
It was very sad, good job 5/5 |
by Lana
Thank you for taking the time to read my story..it's been three months since then...and it's still hell...but thank you for reading and commenting |
by DaytimeStar
Wow thats really weird but kool and sad at the same time keep writing xD |
by coreys girl
Wow thats sad but i know what your going through |
by Hermosa
This is an amazing poem you had me at the edge of my seat waiting for more after every line. Good job and im so sorry if this happened to you but keep on looking forward you have great things coming to you with your writing. |
by Ciara
Wow, that i thought was so sad to put a woman through that emotional pain but to bring some good from it, is like a miricle, 5/5 |
by ImOnlyMe
I'm so sorry this happened, its great. 5/5 |
by Montgomery
Your pain, torment, and fear is graphic. Your poem clearly embodies the sense of powerlessness. It exposes the darkness and depravity hidden in the human heart |