Our Days are Done

by Kaitlin   Jul 3, 2008


Time flies when your having fun,
time cries when lives are done.
So when you go remember this,
I loved you more than all the rest.

No one could see me without you,
now, since your gone, our days are through.
And when you see me standing here,
I hope I send a message clear.

That if you ever come round again,
I will always be your friend.
When life's small struggles turn into pain,
Just remember to walk in the rain.

So now you're gone,
my days are done.
What was our song,
has now been sung.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kaitlin

    Thank you very much

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    This poem was a beautiful one.
    i loved all the emotion it was filled with.

    That if you ever come round again,
    I will always be your friend.
    When life's small struggles turn into pain,
    Just remember to walk in the rain.

    this was my favorite stanza!!
    you choose your words very wisely.
    job well done.