Comments : Our Days are Done

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    This poem was a beautiful one.
    i loved all the emotion it was filled with.

    That if you ever come round again,
    I will always be your friend.
    When life's small struggles turn into pain,
    Just remember to walk in the rain.

    this was my favorite stanza!!
    you choose your words very wisely.
    job well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaitlin

    Thank you very much