First Sight (part 2)

by Aish   Jul 3, 2008


The second time i saw you there,
those same green eyes and same blonde hair
i knew that i couldnt possibly
leave and forget was this was to me
we'd only met the previous night
but it felt like a lifetime-at least from my sight
we talked, we flirted, we laughed and we played
and more feelings and longings inside me were made
we swapped details and said "keep in touch"
through phone calls, messages, msn and such
as we all took the bow and it came to an end
did you just think of me as a new found friend
or when we talked, flirted and teased
did you mean any of it, anything, please?
or was it all just in good fun for you
and i was the only one who felt something else too.
however, we hugged and promised to keep in touch
you'd enjoyed my company, i believed that much
we will talk again, and meet up again soon.
But is it as hopefuls for me, and simply friends for you?

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  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    Ok well here goes.

    The second time i saw you there,
    those same green eyes and same blonde hair
    i knew that i couldnt possibly
    leave and forget was this was to me

    ^^^ the last line confused me, may want to fix that.

    we'd only met the previous night
    but it felt like a lifetime-at least from my sight
    we talked, we flirted, we laughed and we played
    and more feelings and longings inside me were made

    ^^^ very cute and have felt that before

    we swapped details and said "keep in touch"
    through phone calls, messages, msn and such
    as we all took the bow and it came to an end
    did you just think of me as a new found friend
    or when we talked, flirted and teased
    did you mean any of it, anything, please?

    ^^ isnt it funny how even though people say things you are never truly sure if they mean it or not.

    or was it all just in good fun for you
    and i was the only one who felt something else too.
    however, we hugged and promised to keep in touch
    you'd enjoyed my company, i believed that much

    ^^ sometimes have to keep up hope that they mean what they say loves

    we will talk again, and meet up again soon.
    But is it as hopefuls for me, simply friends for you?

    ^^ change the hopefuls to hopeful* take out the s