Crying out love

by beautiful dreamer   Jul 4, 2008


I'm weeping inside.
There is nothing to hide,
I'm crying out love.

You left me here.
No explanation,
I'm crying out love.

You hurt me.
These are not tears of pain,
I'm crying out love.

You will always be in my heart.
Even if I'm not in yours,
i will always be, crying out love.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kait

    I get where you are going with this. it has a great story behind it. but,i think you can add a few more lines to make the poem more heated instead of just having two lines before you say i'm crying out love. just a thought.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    It is small, sad but sweet poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Yours Truly xO

    Wow this poem was really good. i really liked it :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachelle

    I love this poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Awe so sad....

    i loved how u used the word "weeping" instead of "crying" because im an old fashion sorta person, and that was to taly awsum!!

    great job!

    Aly

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