Awe so sad....

i loved how u used the word "weeping" instead of "crying" because im an old fashion sorta person, and that was to taly awsum!!

great job!

Aly

I love this poem 5/5

Wow this poem was really good. i really liked it :]

It is small, sad but sweet poem.

I get where you are going with this. it has a great story behind it. but,i think you can add a few more lines to make the poem more heated instead of just having two lines before you say i'm crying out love. just a thought.