Two Paths

by Justin   Jul 4, 2008


The pain inside me is growing fast
The love I have for you will always last
I ty to get close but you push me away
To have your love, i can only pray

I can only hope that some day you will see
Make you wonder how it could be
If you would have given me just one chance
Or even let me have the last dance

Growing older feelings becoming lost
Never again will our paths ever cross
I hope your heart always spins
Everyday wondering... what could of been

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  • 15 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Some paths are meant to be crossed again and you never know when it will happen. Nice work, great words, well placed and thought out. Bravo

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaimee

    Wonderful job.
    I loved it =]
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Short but direct to the point...It explained well how much feelings you have for the girl...The ryhme made the poem so cute although filled with sadness...great job..

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    I really love this poem.I know that it's about wanting a love you can't have but,I looked at it in a different angle.The last sentence made me think of the relationship that I just got out of because I wonder what I did wrong and what the future could have held.5/5

    ---amber---

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    This piece was nicely written and a very good read. Although the flow was a bit rocky, I really like it. I understand exactly how this feels like, and I get the poem so well. And some of the rhyme seemed a bit forced, but still a great poem :] 5/5.

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