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by Mercedes Jun 1, 2004 category : Love, romance / i love you
I love you more than most And just so you will know I had all the feelings I denied And decided not to show But now since you have cut me loose And we're no longer speaking I had to let you know About some things that I've been thinking... First of all, I don't know why you shut me out like you did Were you hurt? Were you pissed? Was it something I did? If it is you know I'm sorry But you're just as wrong as me Just because something that i know is dumb You act like you can't speak Don't let your so called "friends" Tell you things I didn't do Because if a friend was a true friend You'd only have a few I will lose you as a friend Before I lose a bit of pride But as much as I try to lose this love I feel for you inside... I cant and I stand here saying Seriously I wont Whether you decide to speak to me Is your choice Do or don'tplz comment
by Mercedes
thank u all so much for the positive feedback its greatly appreciated!
by yup
Great poem. It sounds a lot like something that happened to my best friend recently. If its based on your experience Im sorry. Keep writing, its great Kelly