AHHH! Gabby! Amazing!

Haha, these are my favorite type of poems. I love the really dark disturbing ones. I think you executed this very well.

----------> So hush little baby,
now please try not to cry.
The boogie man's the least of your worries
when you're living just to die.
`` Oh my gosh. I wish I had thought of this idea. I love it. Changing the words of such a sweet angelic song to something creepy and.. psychopathic just blows me away! Yes, I am a weird person. ><

----------> Please the nightmares, and baby, you can't go wrong.
`` This was a very strong ending. The words just keep repeating in my head. I think this was my favorite line in the whole poem. I sums up everything nicely and just leaves chills running down your spine!

Amazing job! x]

Keep writing!
Cayce

So hush little baby,
now please try not to cry.
The boogie man's the least of your worries
when you're living just to die.

I liked that bit the best. It had a familiar tone, and gave the story a new kind of meaning.

Really good.
5/5.

xx