Haiku - Angels' breath

by EvangelineCullen   Jul 4, 2008


Angels' breath softly
stirring the vibrant young leaves
on an ancient tree.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Very sweet, so much said in so little words!

    "Angels' breath softly"

    It would make more sense if you turned
    "breath" to "breathe"

    "stirring the vibrant young leaves
    on an ancient tree."

    I loved your imagery here, really amazing!!
    Take care and keep writing! :)

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