You Don't Notice

by butterfly   Jul 4, 2008


You dont see me when you walk by me in the hall
but i see you with them and i fall
i must tell you
my love is true
i watch you and watch you but you never see
how i long for you to be with me

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  • 16 years ago

    by alwayssofresh16

    This was ghud... it was short but it still had alot of feelin... 5/5...

  • 16 years ago

    by XxShadowxOfxYourxShadowxXMyxMiNdxIsxFrOzEnxX

    Omg,I really love this one...I feel almost the same way...
    This is short and simple but still really good...
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    I really like this poem. so ppl are really blind to see what they have in front pf them is the best thing that would happened to them. love it. great job.=)

  • 16 years ago

    by butterfly

    Thank you so much

  • 16 years ago

    by ReinaPuente

    Sometimes girls are just soooo blind that they cant see that the right guy is right in front of them!!
    and i really have to say that i like this poem!!
    5/5

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