Comments : Dying Rose

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wow
    seriously, wonderful poem
    passionate and full of emotions, i could tell how much you loved him

    my favorite part was:
    "So many tears were wasted over him
    I have nothing else to lose, I've already lost him
    So this is my way to let it all out
    I'll write my poems,
    I'll sit in my room I'll scream and shout
    I'll yell I'll kick I can't help but pout

    Its so hard for me
    Why cant you see
    That my love for you was true
    Why wasnt yours true for me?"

    well done,

  • 16 years ago

    by Sam Hindmarsh

    Brilliant sense of emotion.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Awesome job with the poem. I'm sorry about this. I mean when u lose someone, sometimes it takes time to heal that scar that person left on ur heart. Awesome job it was full of emotion.
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by XxXMissSweetPeaXxX

    This is a really good poem..i can so relate..and yea this is like one of my fav..
    Theres an empty space in my heart
    It will never close
    Until you come and heal that empty part
    i love that part...omg guys r such jerks..but good poem and keep up the good work..5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by halie

    Wonderful poem
    and ive beem there,
    and i can relate
    and a guy like that isnt worth ur tears
    just lik this quote
    "if a guy doesnt think ur worth his time, he aint worth ur tears"
    but yea he aint worth it, you deserve sooooo much better than him
    5/5

    p.s thanks for the comment too lol :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Brennan P

    Very well written, I'm sorry you had a bad experience though,5/5