Falling Love

by Robert Anthony   Jul 4, 2008


The pain in my heart
The tears in my eyes
dreams falling apart
head full of lies
I fell in love

I cant believe your gone
I wanna know
why did you leave
can't take this anymore
I'm here alone

Sad,Crying
I'm Alone

I cut my wrist
I think I'm bleeding
no, I'm dying
I loved you
you didn't care

I've lost you
The one I loved
I wanted you
but you didn't care

Life isn't fair
Why must heart tear.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    This is a really good poem. It's very relateable, which is what I like about it. Especially the lines:
    "I cant believe your gone
    I wanna know
    why did you leave
    can't take this anymore
    I'm here alone"

    Dead on man. You did a really good job. The only critique I would give is:
    "Sad,Crying" Put a space after the comma :)

    Great job, keep on writing :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex

    Love it hunny!!! i know what u mean...i practically live with u so yea...i know..5/5!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael Verterel

    I think you only wrote this about how you're feeling at home locked up in your room and being pushed around back and forth to do things you don't want to do, also for Danny of course....

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