I think you only wrote this about how you're feeling at home locked up in your room and being pushed around back and forth to do things you don't want to do, also for Danny of course....

Love it hunny!!! i know what u mean...i practically live with u so yea...i know..5/5!!!

This is a really good poem. It's very relateable, which is what I like about it. Especially the lines:
"I cant believe your gone
I wanna know
why did you leave
can't take this anymore
I'm here alone"

Dead on man. You did a really good job. The only critique I would give is:
"Sad,Crying" Put a space after the comma :)

Great job, keep on writing :) 5/5