Comments : Broken Promises

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    This poem is very true. some ppl can never keep their promises to to others, and it really hurts, ive been there also. but you did a wonderful job on this, keep up the nice work.

    -ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by ShyandHurt

    I know this feeling. You explain it fairly well in your writing. Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by reJoyce

    Sad reality that is so unfair. i really liked the line: "You once promised me you would keep your promises" its kind of an in your face but rightfully so. maybe give the person this poem i dont know your situation though. very sincere feelings 5/5