Comments : Final Goodbye

  • 16 years ago

    by paul alexander

    I l9ove the way you wrote this poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Anne Garcia

    Poems from the heart are the best...
    I felt all your emotions through this poem. I think this is still your best work. Keep writing like this, it's very good! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenny Cortes

    I really like your poem, and I can totally relate to how you felt while writing this... hmmm :)

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    I think you put alot of emotions into it so definitely i would say its good..its not just the style or wether they ryhme that makes a poem a good read. I could feel the pain and sadness in it...

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Wow.. its amazing.. very good with so much emotion.. sad but very good.. keep up the great work..!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Eric Ochoa

    Wow i love this poem great job. something i can really relate to

  • 16 years ago

    by LadzOfSoul

    I love this one... spoken from the heart...
    keep it up... :)

  • 16 years ago

    by dAnCe4aDrEaM

    Looove this poem.

    i can relate 100%...i just went through that.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blueleo

    I loved it also. I'm going through the same phase, or better yet, have been going through it for a couple of years. Especially if you lose the person that felt like your soul mate. I loved every line. Thanks for a great read.

  • 16 years ago

    by Megan

    Im going through that AS WE SPEAK lol..im having a fight with my boyfriend..idk if he was abusive towards you like mine is..but he hurts me..emotionally and physically..so i can totally relate to this poem..its heartbreaking to see someone you love hurt you and cause you pain. im sorry.
    all in all that was a very amazing poem. i liked it very much.

  • 16 years ago

    by haunted

    Heyyyy I REALLY liked this poem.
    It shows such anger and frustration!!
    Haha even though this isn't the stuff I usually read, I think this is really good!!!
    Great job!!!!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by That One Girl

    That was wayy good!
    you are talented!
    keep writing!
    5/5
    <3
    lex