Comments : To Whisper Love

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    That quote's so true...dancing in the rain and the snow though. snow is fun to dance in, but maybe that's because snow is so rare here...anyway.

    To kiss her in the rain
    To stare in eyes that blue
    To sing the best song of them all
    To whisper love to you

    ^^ definitely my favorite stanza..

    great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by DaytimeStar

    Thats really good i like every part
    XD
    keep writing more poems i would like to read them lol

    10/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Still Slightly Broken

    Aww.
    So sweet and pure.
    Dancing in the rain is fun.
    5/5 for sure.
    Keep it up :)

    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    Dancing in the rain!!! Awwww....what a sweet poem!!! There is just something so special aboout the rain that brings so much love and happiness when love ones are in love. I love your poem VERY MUCH!!!. The emotions expressed in this poem were clearlly seen. I loved the poem a lot!!! Keep writing b/c I would love to read more of your poems. Great JOB!!! 5/5

    Amber~

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Awh this was a sweet poem. very touching. you got your message across well. i loved the emotion you expressed, very beautiful. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    Best...day....ever...