U promise

by Rachelle   Jul 5, 2008


Waching the fireworks
while ur by my side
u promise you'll never lie
and you'll never make me cry
I don't believe u though
I've been broke so many times
but I love u so please
don't put me though that again

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lil Ally Kat Xx In love xX

    Its a cute lil poem and made of honesty!!!! I like what it repesents!!!! <cant spell>

  • 16 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    "you where there when i lost, loved ones dear to me
    and you helped me to survive from lifes raging see."
    I wrot a song, and this is a couple of the words to the jump in the song,
    good poem, hard for words to discribe.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    I like the meaning of it. I mean the only reason you fall in love is because u don't think no one will break ur heart. The only thing i would suggest is that you should extend it a lil more
    -vino