I like the meaning of it. I mean the only reason you fall in love is because u don't think no one will break ur heart. The only thing i would suggest is that you should extend it a lil more
-vino

"you where there when i lost, loved ones dear to me
and you helped me to survive from lifes raging see."
I wrot a song, and this is a couple of the words to the jump in the song,
good poem, hard for words to discribe.

Its a cute lil poem and made of honesty!!!! I like what it repesents!!!! <cant spell>