He didn't come back

I liked this one a lot. It felt as though you really connected with the topic. I don't know if you actually had a connection or not, but it came off like you did. Beautiful. 5/5

One word, excellent. No more are needed.

Very well written. i am so sorry for your loss! This poem truly captured your emotions... excellent!

In the first verse=
I like the imagery.
how you describe "him" and you together.
but you know deep in your heart its just a dream, but it feels like everything is all right.
I'd like to tell you i know how you feel but i dont.
I wish i did though.
I would take some of the pain away if i could.
5/5

"How I miss his loving arms
And the smile upon his face
he took such good care of me
Before he left this place"

that part is truly beautiful
And sad I truly enjoyed your
poem keep write beautiful poems (^_^)
5/5