Butiful. x x

What a very sad poem although beautifully written something i too can relate to having served in my counties armed forces,well done

Grant

Hi, what can i say, to say written with feling or emotion is not enough, this is one poem that i will always look back to. Beautiful

Wow, this has so much feeling in it. You have out done yourself. It kills me to read this. You have written a heart gripper in this one.

That one is so beautiful and touching its left me lost for words.

Again really really touching. and im so sorry that you had to go through all that.

"How I miss his loving arms
And the smile upon his face
he took such good care of me
Before he left this place"

that part is truly beautiful
And sad I truly enjoyed your
poem keep write beautiful poems (^_^)
5/5

In the first verse=
I like the imagery.
how you describe "him" and you together.
but you know deep in your heart its just a dream, but it feels like everything is all right.
I'd like to tell you i know how you feel but i dont.
I wish i did though.
I would take some of the pain away if i could.
5/5

Very well written. i am so sorry for your loss! This poem truly captured your emotions... excellent!

One word, excellent. No more are needed.

I liked this one a lot. It felt as though you really connected with the topic. I don't know if you actually had a connection or not, but it came off like you did. Beautiful. 5/5