by RussianRendezvous Jul 5, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Dance with me through open doors, |
by Jessica
Another amazing poem! You're seriously only 14? I can only imagine how good you'll be 10 years from now. this was flawless, a worthy 5. |
Wonderful poem, and strong word choice |
by Crystal
You are really good at writing you should keep up the good work :) and btw you are really good at rhyming i loved it :) |
by Steven Topaz
Your better with ryhming then you think I believe. lol I can not write a story in to my poem that well at all. I have to be very general in my poems something that you never do so that makes it that more amazing |
by Sarah Dawn
Great poem! Awesome rhyming and not what I expected. The first line gives you an idea of what the poem is about, but it was way different than what I expected. I loved the ending!! Actually, I loved the whole thing! I'm adding it to my favs list. Great job. 6/5 |