First comment woot! haha i love it. its straight to the point and from the heart. some peots can kinda go off subject but u didnt and you stayed with it and kept all your feelings in order

"Ever known the feeling that everyone around you seems so in love
And you're the only one that is not
That's when I realise I should be happy with me,
Cause I'm the only thing I've got."

^^ First line -- The word "known" sounds.. weird to me. Maybe use "had", instead? "Ever had the feeling.."? And I think "realize" should be spelled with a 'z'.

"Love is not the world,
Far from it, I should know.
But it would be nice,
To be held in someone's arms again though."

^^ I liked this stanza a lot. However, I think taking out the word "again" would make it flow better.

"I just miss the love,
Miss a smile,
That says everything by saying nothing at all.
Miss that part that you can't stop drawing little hearts for a while."

^^ The second line -- I think you should add "and I" to the beginning. And the fourth line -- I think you should shorten it slightly. It takes away from the flow, because it is so much longer than the rest.

"And to be honest,
I miss those fights,
The fights about nothing,
The fights that make those wrongs, the rights."

^^ There is something about this stanza that I like. I'm not sure what, but I like it. Haha. :]

"You see, nothing would be as great
As some warm arms around me,
Just something to keep close,
But it's just some absentee."

^^ I LOVE this stanza. It's the best, in my opinion. The rhymes are good, and it flows good.

"I just miss the love,
Miss a smile,
That says everything by saying nothing at all.
Miss that part that you can't stop drawing little hearts for a while."

^^ Because this is a repeat, I'm going to say the same thing I said about this stanza the first time: The second line -- I think you should add "and I" to the beginning. And the fourth line -- I think you should shorten it slightly. It takes away from the flow, because it is so much longer than the rest.

Overall; it could use some work. It was good, though, and I liked the emotion it held.

4/5

-Briana

Good poem birgit. Is this poem about mike? just curious. Anyway it's good to read something from you again :) keep up the good work.

No it's not about him =] Just about missing the feeling =]