by Bittersweet Sundown Jul 5, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You can make me smile, one last time, |
Awww... beautiful! This poem is filled with emotion that has been expressed very well and I think many people can relate to it. I personally always wonder about certain memories and if people forget them or remember them, and if they do remember them, are they happy or sad? I loved it. I especially loved the ending. It really gave it a nicer ending than I anticipated! Great job :) |
Wow this poem i swear it left me breathless |
by charles
Good write, seems to be heart-felt with each word. Hope all's not forgotten for a long time to come. |