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by Miss Lonely Teacher   Jul 5, 2008


Locked away in my head
are all the things I've never said
don't know how,don't know why
never felt like i could fly
always grounded, never free
I'm surrounded, need to flee
call for help, backs are turned
all the lessons never learned
need to live with grace and kindness
or we'll die so they remind us
nothing ventured, nothing gained
that is why i still remain

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  • 13 years ago

    by Clown

    I really like this peice, it was short, simple and to the point, like DeafBeats said, HELPS=HELP, but other then that, beautifully writtin. Nothing Ventured, Nothing Gained, that was my favorit line. A good tittle for this would be something in relations to Looking For Freedom, 4/5

  • 13 years ago

    by DeafBeats

    Nice short poem though
    you have a typo>>>call for helps [help], backs are turned

    nothing ventured, nothing gained
    that is why i still remain
    ^^^
    great ending lines - gives the reader the reason why the character in this poem feels/say this

    4/5

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