Nice short poem though
you have a typo>>>call for helps [help], backs are turned

nothing ventured, nothing gained
that is why i still remain
^^^
great ending lines - gives the reader the reason why the character in this poem feels/say this

4/5

I really like this peice, it was short, simple and to the point, like DeafBeats said, HELPS=HELP, but other then that, beautifully writtin. Nothing Ventured, Nothing Gained, that was my favorit line. A good tittle for this would be something in relations to Looking For Freedom, 4/5