Whatever Happens...Happens, No Regrets.

by Courageous Dreamer   Jul 5, 2008


-*Written for a Contest.*-

As much as I want to be loved by you,
How audaciously I want everything to be indefectible,
I can't dissipate anymore time thinking,
I have to put my plans into action.

Whatever I may encounter in the process-
of telling you how I feel; whether good or bad-
I have to take the experience and acquire from it.
Whatever happens...will happen for a reason-
and I will not live with any regrets.

I'll lay my heart on the line
And disengage every feeling I've had kept obscure
for three whole years...and let everything unwind.
The concluding outcome is what I'll be contrived to deal with,
I'll have to put that smile back on my face- regardless,
and live my life the way I was previously to liking you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Really true words n the caption is perfectly apt for the poem.

    I liked the word choice n the reasons that u have depicted in ur poem abt why we shouldnt regret n continue smiling.
    superb.
    tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by H E Losey

    I understand what you feel but this write reads like prose to me. Like a letter written following that breakup.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    That was amazing!
    I really can relate to you poem.. well, a great part of it..
    Good word choice.
    Well done!
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    First of all, I love the title. Secondly-est (I know I made it up.. I have a tendency to do that..) this poem was the shizz.

    "And disengage every feeling I've had kept obscure"

    Personally I think if you just type out the whole word here (have if you're slow like me..) it would sound a lot better.. but thats just me.

    Anyway.. wonderful job. 5/5 from me hunn.

  • 16 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    I loved this. It's written perfectly, with the exception of a small spelling error, I believe --

    "I'll lay my heart on the line
    And disengage every feeling I've had kept obscure
    for three whole years...and let everything unwind.
    The concluding outcome is what I'll be contrived to deal with,
    I'll have to put that smile back on my face- regardless,
    and live my life the way I was perviously to liking you."

    ^^ "perviously" should be "previously", I think.

    Again, your word choice is amazing. The piece is wonderful. :]

    5/5

    -Briana

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