Your Star

by NEIL MUNRO   Jul 6, 2008


As I stand here, so far away,
Just looking to the skies,
I saw your star, it was shining bright,
The colour of your eyes.

I think my heart is going to stop,
When I leave, and you close that door,
Then when I'm home and see you again,
I know that I'm in love with you more.

I feel I am the luckiest man,
In the whole of this great space,
When I see the love you have for me,
Spreading over your lovely face.

So I wish this life, I could freeze in time,
Then we'd be together, and you would be mine,
But not for an hour, and not for a day,
Just only forever, until eternity.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    This was so lovely, and sweet. So well written with true emotions running through it. Stay strong in love it's well worth the time
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    I hope one day you will be together ,not just for that hour or that day but always ,as it is so very clear as to where your heart does lie.The poem by the way is beautiful.

  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    A very romantic and heartfelt write,I enjoyed this very much.excellent job.

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