I looove that song! I love Breaking Benjamin, period. Hehe, sorry I just had to say that. ^.^

I liked how you wrote this poem as diary entries. I used to keep a diary, but found out that's a bad idea when you have nosey people in your house. I guess that's one of the reasons I started writing poems.

----------> I fell today, a little harder than before.
`` To be honest, I'm not exactly sure what this line means. >< Do you mean falling in love or actually falling? Oh well, I like that it can be interpreted different ways. :]

This last three stanzas were definitely the most heart breaking. When I read it, I just felt so sorry for Jane, because I know how it feels to want/need someone to make all the pain go away. You did a great job with emotions.

Nicely done! x]

Keep writing!
Cayce