Sweet Dreams

by Shinobi   Jul 6, 2008


Those dreams, of sweet times in distant past
The hope it shall never be torn apart
A weak relationship never meant to last
Friendship never meant to exist from the start

Together, you and I, appear in my hazy dreams
No glimpse of deception appear to meet the eye
Only if the warm moments weren't turned to schemes
Only then it could last long, with no need for goodbye

Once again I see your face glancing at my sight
Smile spread through your giggling face
Together we find our ways into the night
Reality shows, it's not even close to the case

Deceptively was played throughout the year
A true hypocrite made me open my eyes and see
Now I know it's you who I can't get near
Or else more pain would be brought upon me

Last goodbye for moments sweet and warm
Farewell for deceptive kindness and lies
Never to meet again with this demon
In full power once more, I finally rise

------------------------------------------------------

A really sad story about a deceptive friend I once had.
May we never meet again.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    I loved your choice of wording used throughout this poem! great job!
    The rhyming flow was perfect and the emotion put into the piece captivates the reader! Good job, your a talented writter =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Empathy

    Countless people could relate to this poem. Life is full of deceptions, and certain types of people can cause them. We just have to be more aware in life and always be sure of our surroundings.

    I really enjoyed reading the poem. I myself can relate to it, because of a certain incident with past people I met long ago. Compared to the present however that event means nothing. Overall I would say you did a very good job with this.

    Great work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Wow this poem is so fantastic...I can relate to your words so well because I too had a friend just like this once. We often choose not to see people for who they really are until it's to late, and once there gone your just glad it's over with. Excellent poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    I've been looking all over for a poem like this, the ryme is just flawless and amazingly well written. My favorite stanza:

    Together, you and I, appear in my hazy dreams
    No glimpse of deception appear to meet the eye
    Only if the warm moments weren't turned to schemes
    Only then it could last long, with no need for goodbye"

    You've really done well with this one,

    keep up the good work!!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    I have had a friend just like that so I can highly relate.She was one of my best friends for 4 years && it turns out all that time,she was stabbing me in the back.

    "Now I know it's you who I can't get near
    Or else more pain would be brought upon me"

    ^That was my favorite line in this poem.

    5/5

    --amber--

Read All Comments (5)

More Poems By Shinobi