by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash Jul 6, 2008
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Lonely wind (Haiku) |
Nice good flow and image. |
by John Long
I really enjoyed the rich imagery of this haiku, the last line in particular. Excellent. |
by Montgomery
Your poem breathe life into this natural setting. The "lonely wind' whispering through "stately fir treet, coalesces beautifully with the sound from the owl and the muted gaze of the "blue winter moon" to reveal moving and emotional imagery which is spiritual in essence. Your eye is sharp and your imagination is fluid. |
by gracey grey
:)................yeah, congrats on this piece........ totally different kinda write. Now you see, we still got lots more to learn here.......... |
by Sourav
Ok... another one not at all in Haiku but I really liked your poem. Very interesting! |