Comments : Lonely wind (Haiku)

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is beautiful, you have some serious talent! Great imagery in this haiku, very well-written. Good work, take care! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Ok... another one not at all in Haiku but I really liked your poem. Very interesting!

  • 16 years ago

    by gracey grey

    :)................yeah, congrats on this piece........ totally different kinda write. Now you see, we still got lots more to learn here..........

  • 16 years ago

    by Montgomery

    Your poem breathe life into this natural setting. The "lonely wind' whispering through "stately fir treet, coalesces beautifully with the sound from the owl and the muted gaze of the "blue winter moon" to reveal moving and emotional imagery which is spiritual in essence. Your eye is sharp and your imagination is fluid.

  • 16 years ago

    by John Long

    I really enjoyed the rich imagery of this haiku, the last line in particular. Excellent.

  • 16 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Nice good flow and image.