Comments : When I Saw You First Time

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    A nice love poem written from the heart. Something we all want, a heart that is true to only one. I hope you will keep writing. This was good work.

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Well written Pam, you have expressed love in a lovely way
    Your poem was most pleasant to read ,well done

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This is absolutely beautiful pam. I like these words"Don't make your heart like a garden,
    So, that everyone walks in,
    But make it like a sky,
    Which everybody wishes to touch,
    But only moon can stay on it". Very well done, kel.

  • 15 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Gr8 work...keep it up

  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very romantic... Nice write!

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Theses lines are absolutely beautiful .... and so is your poem, Lol....

    "Don't make your heart like a garden,
    So, that everyone walks in,
    But make it like a sky,
    Which everybody wishes to touch,"

    You have a talent for writing that touches the heart.. Well done!

    Lol,
    Olwin.