Hate is my own satisfaction

by Goth marionette   Jul 6, 2008


Hate is not fire torturing me inside,
It's the pleasure of the pain I feel tonight.

I won't seek revenge and I will never forgive,
So Hate is the only alternative.

Hate is my solution, shelter and fever.
As I can't kill you everyday,but I can hate you forever.

I promise to be your angel of darkness.
I promise to be the cause of all your sickness.

I'll keep watching you ,when you are suffering.
I'll laugh at you ,when you are shattering.

You played your role and here comes mine.
The beat will come to you suddenly with no sign.

You judged me with no mercy and that was so fast,
So now you can't expect which place of you will bleed at last.

No matter if you have learned the lesson this way or another.
In all cases I'll come to you at night & paint your room with the red color.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    OMG,IT WAS REALLY FANTASTIC!!!!some people think that when you hate someone that you are selfish, don't know that the person you hate he is also the one who hurts you and he is the one who taught you how to hate others.

    nice poem 5\5...

  • 16 years ago

    by Nebula

    You have captured this very powerfull emotion perfectly... I love how simply you put forward and dismiss the alternatives. Every aspect of the emotion is presented. love it...

  • 16 years ago

    by Thomas

    Such a dark, sinister poem. Very well-written. Straight to the point of hating someone, and using your hatred as a reason for revenge. Great poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blueleo

    I never thought of the satisfaction that could come from hate. Although, I always believed in the power of hate. My favorite line has to be:
    "As I can't kill you everyday but I can hate you forever."

    That was awesome. I would sure like to send that out to past loves. Sadly, I have to say I enjoyed this poem too much for my own good, LOL. It was very powerful. Great job as always.

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex

    Amazing, I agree with all the other comments on here. This is the first poem of yours i've read but intend to read more. The line below is so poweful, and can be used to express many situation. Thanks for the power in this.

    Hate is my solution, shelter and fever
    As I can't kill you everyday but I can hate you forever

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