OMG!!!!

this reminded me a lot of my first poem

u know u are the reason i started writing, the first poem i ever wrote outside of school. this one reminds me a lot of it. i hope you keep writing

i really really do

missed u on the site.

great poem :]

Thank you!!! All who read this, I brought her back! 5/5!

OMG YAY that was reali good.. and am so happy u r bak to writing, was chekin like every week if u had any new ones and now finally u do :)
so glad uve found ur way bak...
keep it up!!
xx talieka

No more caring or trusting
she'll keep her heart hidden away,
she'll protect herself in this darkness
where she intends to stay.

i have tried to do this for so long but it is just way to hard for me

But she takes a step into the light
ignoring all her doubts,
will this time be any different?
we're about to find out...

very good way to end it you kept it open for the reader

5/5