Why is it wrong to love her

by Tammi   Jul 6, 2008


As I sit here with tears in my eyes
I pray to God that you may relize
How much I love you and need you by my side.

I ask God up above to help me get over you
He smiles at me and says trust me
Child I will see you through.

God says to me I am sorry you two cannot be
Please dont ever lose faith in me.

Loving her is not wrong
Being her lover is like singing the wrong song.

Just be her friend and help her along
Show her your love is strong.

I am sorry you two cant be together
I will be here through the storms you will weather.

This is a old poem hope you like it and thank you for reading it have a good day.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Fran

    Very strong writing with a depth of emotion. Loving is never wrong. 5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by anand singh

    I ask God up above to help me get over you
    He smiles at me and says trust me
    Child i will see you through.

    Love this stanza.When God said that he will see you through, you can count on him to do so.He never leave us to bear our burdens alone.
    Much emotions expressed in this piece.
    Take care,
    Paul...

  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    I ask God up above to help me get over you
    He smiles at me and says trust me
    Child I will see you through.

    ^^ that line was my fav. This poem, it is awesome. It has so much emotion (again) and it flows though perfectly and ur rhyme scheme was really excellent in this poem. Really enjoyed the read. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by She Is Now Gone Away

    Sorry about your lost im kinda in the same perdicument but i cant seem to let her go though .

  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    I think one those worst feelings in the world is not being able to be with the one you love, or that person not loving you the same way....its so heart breaking, undescribeable...beautiful poem, seemed like there was an aswer to heart break

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