What happened?

by charles   Jul 6, 2008


How many times we stood looking out this window
gazing at the moon and counting the stars
We stood together making our plans
and talking of the future
A future as bright as the moon
and plans as beautiful as those stars
Time has passed and I now stand alone
gazing at those stars like so many broken dreams
I wonder where it all went wrong
why we let go and let it end
In my heart I still hold you
and watch those stars twinkle in your eyes
I remember all the carefree laughter
that once filled the room
Those feelings remain in my heart
where now is left a quiet lonely sound
Wishing on a falling star we could start over
go back and make things right again
But as I think of them I wonder
what ever happened to the promise of forever

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandraa

    This is so real , excellent . Well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Well written once more, very good flow but once again sad,a lot of emotion shows shows in your poems

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    A beautiful poem ,a little sad too.life can be so cruel when we suffer heartache.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tina Marie

    It is such a good poem, i felt pain in it but then a bit of happiness in it. but it was very good