Please Please Read My Poem

by Robert Meuser   Jul 6, 2008


Please Please Read My Poem

Please please read this poem.
Tell me what you think.
Is it any good,
or does it really stink?

I made it very special
it took me fourteen tries.
I wanted it ready to win
the poet contest prize.

Be candid, you won't offend me
because I'm very tough
I'll keep writing this crap
until you've had enough

Give me your opinion
The truth is what I seek.
You will either love my work
or on it, you'll take a leak.

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  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Lmfao!!! that's awesome!

  • 16 years ago

    by tiff

    Aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh lol

  • 16 years ago

    by LoVeLiFe

    Hehehe funny :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Crossover

    So where is the poems lol
    i think u should edit and take out the apostrophes.
    not the greatest but i did not mind reading it.