by Beautiful Chaos Jul 6, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
Broken spirit, |
Wow, this is so beautiful! First off, nice flow and the rhyming choice was great. You got my attention the whole way through and had me speechless by the end. Every single line had so much meaning and feeling in it, its just incredible! I must say, you are a fantastic writer, so please keep it up!!! :) |