by Miakoda Jul 7, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
To never feel the pain again |
by Simply Josh
Wow. That was my first expression. The flow worked well and the last line created an underlining conclusion. Great job |
by Dan
Short, sweet, and beautiful. I understand the whole concept of this poem. To lock away yourself to stop from being hurt. So you never have to feel weak to someone else. That you just want to be alone. Honestly, great work. |