This poem is the ultimate poem of life! everyone has or will have this happen to them. great poem!!5/5

Baby, I don't think I ever read this one before.

I love the comparisons in your poem though. It was hawt with and AW! :]

You write wonderful poetry, why not write more than this? I bet you could write soooo much great poems. Mmm mmm mmm

The flow was absolutely outstanding. Some things were capatilized without a need. Is that supposed to be there for some specific reason? Anywhoo..

This should win in a contest. Greastest poem, ever!

5/5