Incredibly wonderful.....like a cute sweet rose....sweet, loved it.

:) thanks!

"I'm his rose whether he knows it or not
I'm his rose because he protects me
I'm his rose because he set me free
I'm his rose because he gave me his hand
I'm his rose because he's the right man"

^I would say there is too much repetition here, and it makes the poem less interesting. Try to start a line with something besides "I'm his rose because..."

"The red rose whispers of passion
The white rose whispers of love
Oh, the red rose is a falcon
And the white rose is a dove"

^Very beautiful words you wrote here, nice job.......

Also, capitalize all the I's in your poem, just proper grammer. And since this is such a long write, try either putting punctuation marks in, or separte your poem into equal stanzas. Otherwise, this was pretty good, I liked the whole idea of it. Keep writing, always and forever..........