Comments : Cigerettes and Nightmares

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats on your win :) Well done.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by suicide once again

    This poem is sick i love it. its true in so many ways

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobody

    Chilling but i sense the pain. great flow and word choice its an incredable and haunting poem i loved it! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ian Robert

    I really enjoyed reading this one.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna Rose Kat

    Wow I really like the imagery used. I feel like Im in the poem.
    5/5 :)
    Keep up the great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Ahem...wow.. I dunno where to start..

    First off.. liked the word choice.. and the flow was refreshing somehow..

    Yet.. it seemed like you dont really know what you're talking about. I mean... Nightmares and cigarettes are great, but..I don't see the connection..with the poem.

    It seemed like you were actually talking about..a psychological episode..and not about a nightmare or anything...

    You said so much without saying anything at all.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    They both have something in common there both dark and evil and at time take lives. I had writers block for two years and i just started writing again so if u want check out my new poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dutch

    I relate.
    Extremely well written.
    Imagery was fantastic.
    I'm really impressed with this.
    5/5 from me.
    xxx

  • I love it. congratualtions for winning. i love the imagery. and the ryhme flow. its a real piece. good job.
    5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxDaniellexx

    Awsome!!! Really touching.

    Great job!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Synyster

    Very nice poem. For some reason it makes me think of paparazzi. Especially with this line:

    "Tormented by photographs.

    Now imitations of crisis flash,
    As the light flickers; Burning fast,"

    Was that your intention?

  • 15 years ago

    by groovydude

    Odd yet true, confused but understood, I enjoyed how it made me think....

  • 14 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    LOVED IT

  • 14 years ago

    by ShIsAnA tHe OnE aNd OnLy

    Wow!i loved it!!5/5 you are on my favorite poet list know:))<3