Heartfelt Reality

by Kalgalath   Jul 7, 2008


Awaiting to awaken
He is,
From a spectacular dream
Why would he wish to awaken?
Because of the theme

It's a cliche,
A thing too good to be true
A girl likes a boy,
And the boy had no clue

Everything so perfect,
They are,
Together at long last
Why the long?
When time soars by so fast

She reft him of his heart,
She is his everything
Something that's absolute;
This is not just some fling

It must be a dream,
It must,
Be something fake
The boy keeps wondering,
When shall he wake?

The boy dreams day and night
About someone he adores
He does not ever wish to awaken,
Not anymore

If ever he wakes up,
He will,
Feel something sincere
Reality or no,
He'll wish you were here.

In spite of my dream,
In spite of the two
Whenever i wake up,
I'm still going to love you
(last stanza is specific for someone)

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Ive notice some errors in here..like reft to rift....and i think youve mentioned awaken several times in here....But i liked the idea of the poem about a girl and a boy..There was a touch of sweetness and cuteness...and i liked as well how youve mentioned your dedication with your last line...xDD

  • 16 years ago

    by ctmskm

    All Great till the last stanza. Not sure if you meant to or not. You stopped talking from third person back to first. Great poem and thought though. . 5/5

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