I'm Lonely

by H E Losey   Jul 7, 2008


Mornings come and the dawn finds me
Lying with another, and yet
I'm lonely

Time speeds on, the day envelopes me
Hundreds are there, and yet
I'm lonely

The day ends, my home calls me
A house not a home, and yet
I'm lonely

The night steals down to surround me
Comforting stars and moon, and yet
I'm lonely

Sleep pulls and overcomes me
Dreams of your love, and yet
I'm lonely

published 2006

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Well expressed, you stated your feelings very clearly in this poem, and I really enjoyed it:

    "Sleep pulls and overcomes me
    Dreams of your love, and yet
    I'm lonely"

    Very powerful last stanza, the word usage is just beautiful, nice job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was a sad poem but you can clearly see how the author is feeling at the moment [lonely], which is what I would look for in a poem. Great write, 5/5.

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