Aww. this was a sad poem. but you know what, i know a lot of people can relate to such a situation of love...a wonderful poem, again...this poem had a nice repitition of the first stanza, it was truely effective and perfect. this could almost be like a song if it was shorter. 5/5.

This is a very sad but very well written poem with a lot of emotion. well done:)

I see your poems, I truly can relate!! You have words that can blow minds... Keep you wondering why.